Martial poetry

I wanted to start a thread that had nothing to do with moaning about art vs art and was not a troll… Only thing i could think of was a nice poem i really like. Its part of my schools moral and ethical code and writen by Lao Tzu. Ive also posted this on the main forum but thought i may as well waste everyone elses time here with it as well. Take out of it anything you wish, i hope you enjoy it

Tao Te Jing of Lao Tzu
[the classic of the way]

Only simple and quiet words will ripen of themselves.
For a whirlwind does not last a whole morning.
Nor does a sudden shower last a whole day.
Who is their author? Heaven and Earth!
Even Heaven and Earth cannot make such violent things last long.
How much truer is it of the rash endevours of man?
Hence, he who cultivates The Tao is one with The Tao.
He who practices virtue is one with virtue.
And he who courts loss is one with loss.
To be one with the Tao is to be welcome access to the Tao.
To be one with virtue is to be welcome access to virtue.
To be one with Loss is to be welcome access to loss.
Deficiency of faith on ones part, Entails faithlessness on the part of others.
Be reliable in all dealings.
This will lead to success.

One on tip-toe cannot stand correctly.
One astride cannot walk properly.
One who displays himself does not shine.
One who justifies himself has no glory.
One who boasts of his ability has no merit.
One who parades his own success will never endure.
In Tao these things are called “extrinsic trappings and extraneous neoplasms” which are loathed by all sensible beings.
Hence a man of Tao does not set his heart on them.

There was something undefined and yet complete in itself.
Born beofre Heaven and Earth.
Silent and boundless.
Standing alone without change.
Yet prevading all without fail.
It may be regarded as the Mother of the world.
I do know its name.
I style it “Tao”
And in the absence of a better adjective, I call it “The Great”

Sorry if this had nothing to do with anything i just think its an amazing peice of poetry and is still VERY relavent even in this day.
Anyone else got some martial poetry they feel they can post?
Anyone want to comment on the above?

Awesome. Hey Jon, I’m also a Hung Gar player. I love that poetry, and I love the Tao Te Ching. It makes me feel really good. If you’re interested, I can give you the internet address where you can read/print out a free copy of the tao te ching.

This was one of my SIFU’S favourites

“One when travelling by land avoids the rhinoceros and tiger; dodges arms and weapons when engaged in battle with a hostile army. He sees to it that the rhinoceros have no oppurtunity to use their horns; that tiger have no oppoyunity to use thir claws; that enimies have no oppotunity to use their weapons.”

i spent many of days with my sifu and si-mo at the temple and watched, listened and learnt from him as well as my sihings at the temple.

rest in peace sifu!:slight_smile:

jon,
thanks for the thread it brought back many memories for me.

cheers
Garry:D

well i don’t know what’s goin’ on with all us tough aussie boys & this girly poetry stuff but anyways…
i find this one quite to my liking
the artist transends within himself,
and in that lonely region of stress
and strife if he is deserving and fortunate,
he finds the term of his appeal.
-joseph conrad
vts

Yay for poetry

Thanks everyone for there imput and if anyones got anymore keep em coming i might post some more as well over the next few days.

brucelee2
Great to meet another Hung player, we are all family after all;)
That would be great if you could post the url for that site i would appreciate it.

fiercest tiger
Great poem with a nice message. Im sorry to hear of the passing of your sifu you have my condolences. From what ive read and heard he was a great man. You are very lucky to have had him as a Sifu and have reached the level you have under him, you have my respects.

vingtsunstudent
That was great as well seems to be quite a day for it, its funny that sometimes in the heat of everything going wrong you feel the most clarity.

Keep em coming people im enjoying this…
hehe now all we need is some mood lighting, fine food and wine and of course the girls:D

sui fuw

Are you lost?:stuck_out_tongue:

sui-fuw

“as there’s a difference between knowing the path and walking the path”

Then would you care to light the way?
We all just seek the light at the end of the tunnel anyway.
Couldn’t resist;)

Lao-tzü

“Those who speak know nothing
Those who know are silent.”
These words, as I am told,
Were spoken by Lao-tzü.
If we are to believe that Lao-tzü
Was himself one who knew,
How comes it that he wrote a book
Of five thousand words?

Po Chü-i (772-846)

sui fuw

i can only show you one divine landmark its called KINGS X, in sydney.
i guarentee you will either like it or hate it!:eek: its where the true SAGES hang out.:wink:

sage

in my eyes a sage would be a herb with fragrant, greyish green leaves used to flavour food!:smiley:

oh you mean SAGE? hehehe ok a wise man, having wisdom that he gained from experience.

you can say like me for instance…:wink:

Come on

Haven’t you seen the ‘Wonderful wizard of OZ’?

All together now ‘were off to see the wizard, the wonderful wizard of oz…’

sui-fuw

I find your tone pretty odd not to put to fine a point on it.
I dont go in for games so maybe you might just like to point out why your supperiour to the rest of us mere learners.

“i see you’ve sealed your fate of doom”
-You see nothing my friend, you dont know me or have the slightest idea where im coming from or where im going.

“it was directed to yum cha,anyways read your own poem’s jon”
-Well then i appologise for answering a public statement on a public forum…
“sorry guys couldn’t resist as there’s a difference between knowing the path and walking the path”
-Was addressed to us all actualy, sorry guys are your words not mine…
-As for reading my own poems your quite right, i havent. Im also a misguided person with no hope of making it in this world. So dont worry sui-fuw your secrets are safe from stupid Australians like me. Now excuse me whilst i crawl back into my deep dark hole…

Sorry if this sounds really narky but im yet to read a post from you thats not insulting or just plain pretensious in one way or another. Im glad your Hakka and im glad you learn kung fu in your family, im glad its pure and im glad your happy. Now want to come down off your high horse and join the rest of us mere mortals?
Sorry but i dont care how skilled you are, you rarely offer any good advice and simply sit on the sideline calling people incorrect. You remind me of those two old guys out of the muppets…
Ginger fist was great in that he had the guts to not only stick up for his beliefs but also hand them out. You just put others down but wont offer youself for the same scrutiny.
Poor form and doesnt inspire respect… I hope you dont play your fist in the same way as your words.

Good evening, water tiger…errrr, PAPER tiger. Amazing some people still beleive that you are really Chinese. Anyone ever talk to Hak Ga? They do not say “I am Hak Ga”, they say “I am CHINESE.”

Just to help you become more so, here are a few words meant for you from our dear friend Confucius.

Not to be known should not grieve you: grieve that ye not know men.

Look at a man’s acts, watch his motives: can he evade you? Can he evade you?

A gentleman is broad and fair: the vulgar is biased and petty.

Listen much, keep silent when in doubt, and always take heed of the tongue; thou wilt make few mistakes. See much, beware of pitfalls, and always give heed to thy walk; thou wilt have little to rue. If thy words are seldom wrong, thy deeds leave little to rue, pay will follow.

And my favorite:

Study without thought is vain: thought without study is dangerous.

Hi guys,

Have a look at
www.geocities.com/choylayfut_itc
and once you have entered, click on “Wisdom”.
There are loads of little wisdom things, from either the Tao Te Ching, or Bruce Lee, etc

Galadriel

Heh heh…

Quoting sui-fuw:

"meltdawn?
wheres your blah?not seen a blah blah blah blah on?

still reading blah blah blah i see,another blah iblah,how blah ublah i’m sure?but,your k.f,has it blah blah blah last meeting?your blah?why not blah to blah blah blah blah blah?are you blah blah blah blah blah if i’m blah ga?well if you blah blah blah,then it blah blah blah is it blah blah blah be blah in blah blah or do your blah blah blah blah,blah blah?"

“another blah you’ll blah blah,thy own blah is blah blah blah blah”

I tried to repost and imitate your style, but it is indeed singular. My fingers refused to eliminate spacing adjacent to punctuation and misspell common words. Oh, and feel free to email me if you’d like some lessons on how to type in Chinglish. I teaching you.

Worlds shortest book

The 2002 Guiness book of records will include an entry for the worlds shortest length published text.
It is entitled ‘How to make friends and influence people’ and was writen by KFM board member Sui-fuw. Its half a page of insults and sui-fuw doing his best to sound mystical.
We should all take a step back and give him all the credit he deserves.

I get more out of fortune cookies i buy in the supermarket.

I should really stop ruining the mood of my own thread…

Btw Meltdown that made me laugh:)

sui-fuw

I have a nasty habit of jumping the gun…
Im sorry if i came on with all guns blazing that was pretty silly of me, i should have had a little more restraint.
Truth is i do respect you and do value your imput which is proberly the same reason i got angry reading your coments.
Im just a learner and often my emotion conflicts with my judgement. I did not mean to be quite so detrimental to you and im posting this just to say im not ‘against’ you in any way, shape or form and im sorry if ive come accross that way.
As for testing my kung fu, lol i think now that should be obvious…
I have a LOT to learn.

One thing though maybe im misunderstanding?
“btw meltdawn is gingerfist”
If thats true thats the best darn job of inventing a persona ive ever seen and i would say Meltdown deserves an award. I do find it also very hard to believe. Ginger was actualy VERY knowledgeable about SPM and if you read my thread on southern mantis on the main forum you will see he demonstrated a tiny bit of that knowledge just before leaving to never be heard from again. Meltdown is known for Lung Ying and im not sure how she would attain such knowledge about southern mantis in her system, dispite them both being of a Hakka orgin.
Im talking Ginger knew form names, training methods, power expression, linage he really did know a LOT and not just things you ‘pick up’.
I think you may be mistaken there…

HAHAHHAHAHAHA!

That was your BEST post, sui-fuw!!! Really, I mean it, even better than when you and your buddy denegrated my female anatomy! Whew, I’m dying over here!!!

Now that I know who you are, I really can appreciate your humor.

OK, let me try my hand at this “imposter” thing…

“Hello, ni hao. I am study Hak Ga-Chinese kung fu. My home live in Australia and my Sifu live to Heung Gong. But Sifu pass Away one year pass so I teaching now and am study from Sibak. I not liking many post to speaking bad. My am study long to become have good kung fu. You maybe not study long? My Sifu also teaching me good mouth come good deed, bad mouth come bad deed. You Sifu not teaching you this? Ni go hai gang ho a?”

Sheesh, that took forever! You trolls are to be admired for your efforts.

but but but…

All i wanted to do was post a nice poem:(

Now look whats gone and happened. I took part in this too but now can we pwease return to the orginal topic.
Its so much nicer and more appealing than waging war over our keyboards no?

lol:eek: